听说一个大型零售店要进驻你生活的社区，开一家大规模的店铺，你认为应该进驻，还是不应该进驻。论证一下这个事件在社区内的利弊。

　　Choice A: move in

　　- more product choice

　　- more jobs

　　- better price

　　Choice B: stay out

　　- more traffic

　　- low paying jobs

　　- ruin smaller business

　　Preference: - stay out

　　Topic sentence

　　- There is much controversy that surrounds the move of a big store into a community.

　　Supporting sentences

　　- The traffic will cause noise and pollution in the neighborhood.

　　- Staff will realize that the company controls their working conditions and wages.

　　- Often when a big store comes to town it puts other smaller companies out of business.

　　Opposing view

　　- There are the new jobs that come with the opening of a store.

　　- Shelves will be lined will many more products.

　　Closing statement

　　- The variety and low cost products of a big new store cut out other competitors, turning what was a big short-term advantage for a community into a serious disadvantage.There is much controversy that surrounds the move of a big store into a community. The advantages are very dear but they come with a cost. Firstly, there are the new jobs that come with the opening of a store. At the beginning there are the construction jobs and then the store staff itself must be hired. The shelves will be lined with many more products giving local shoppers more choices and possibly better prices. For a while the new store will be a great place to place to browse or go shopping with friends. All that traffic, however, will cause noise and pollution in the neighborhood. Eventually, the newly hired stall will realize that the company controls their working conditions and wages. If they are unhappy with the new store management, they may not have other choices. Often when a big store comes to town, it put other small companies out of business. The variety and low cost precuts of a big new store cut out other competitors, turning what was a big short-term advantage for a community into a serious disadvantage.