阅读量:
除了最常见的逗号、句号外,关于分号各位知多少呢?
雅思考试对标点有要求吗?
雅思考试对标点当然是有要求的,尤其是在写作GRA 评分项中,明确要求如下:
◆ 5分:punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader(标点错误困扰读者)
◆6分:make some errors in punctuation but they rarely reduce communication(标点错误不致读者误解)
◆7分:produce frequent error-free sentences; has good control of punctuation but may make a few errors(极少标点错误)
官方制定这样游戏规则,那么,我们就照着做呗!
什么时候可以用分号呢?
关于这个问题,剑雅阅读能给我们答案:
One frequently cited motive is safety; indeed, research at the UK’s Transport Research Laboratory has demonstrated that more than 90 percent of road collisions involve human error as a contributory factor, and it is the primary cause in the vast majority. (例句出处:C15)
写法:独立句子;独立句子.
解析:分号后的独立句子细节解释前一个句子
Some were located in or near villages as public spaces for the community; Others were positioned beside roads as resting places for travellers. (例句出处:C10)
写法:独立句子;独立句子.
解析:分号前后的句子构成对比,分号相当于while/whereas
Rubin and colleagues did not assign greater weight to any one dimension in determining playfulness; however, other researchers have suggested that process orientation and a lack of obvious functional purpose may be the most important aspects of play. (例句出处:C14)
写法:独立句子;副词, 独立句子.
解析:分号前后的句子构成转折,分号可以改成句号,however另起新句
These include the technical difficulties in ensuring that the vehicle works reliably in the infinite range of traffic, weather and road situations it might encounter; the regulatory challenges in understanding how liability and enforcement might change when drivers are no longer essential for vehicle operation; and the societal changes that may be required for communities to trust and accept automated vehicles as being a valuable part of the mobility landscape. (例句出处:C15)
写法:独立句子;独立句子;连词+独立句子.
解析:分号前后的两个句子构成并列,相当于中文的排比句
我能在写作中用上分号吗?
当然可以!
我们用《剑14》一篇5.5分的大作文,示范修改。
* 注:仅修改语法点及拼写错误,不作逻辑措辞修改
原句:
In my opinion I think that music can join any people who has different culture together. Music can make a relationship between people all around the world.
修改:
In my opinion I think that music can join people of different cultures together; music can bring people of different ages together; and music can make a relationship between people all around the world.
结构:独立句子;独立句子;and独立句子.
原句:
Although it has different rhythm but when the people who listen to music, their feeling will be better.
修改:
It has different rhythms; however, when people listen to music, their feeling will be better.
结构:独立句子;however, 独立句子.
-小结-
分号好用,不可贪多哦!