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在备考雅思写作时,同学们最常用的方法就是参考写作范文,在范文中找到高分词汇和写作思路是可以在自己的写作中进行灵活运用的。今天与大家分享的雅思写作范文:多元化民族的利弊,供考生们参考。
多元化民族的利弊
主体:nation
sovereignty
community
(conflicts )
思路:
sustainable economic development:
l industry
l agriculture
trading /banking/
l technology
具体事例:中国,美国,日本,England
提纲三层次
be associated with
be connected with
be related to
There is no cause-effect relationship between the cultural diversity,the number of ethnic groupsof which an independent nation or region with sovereignty consists,and the economic development within the nation or region in a certain period of time. For one thing, the cultural diversityexerts no influence onsuch agricultural activities as farming, fishing, and domesticating. History has demonstrated that the crop yields and quality are independent upon the number of ethnic groups. For another, the development of industry is also not closely associated with the cultural diversity.
China is a typical example. Although this country has exactly 56 ethnic groups, the industry lags behind Japan whose ethnic composition is rather homogeneous.
In terms ofeducation, the cultural diversity plays less important roles. Public schools might have excellent faculties and facilities whatever the cultural diversity conditions. Tsinghua University in China serves as a good example. In this university, ninety percent of students are Chinese in nationality. Another example is BLCU where 45% students are of international backgrounds. This university still develops fast. Private schools also disconnected with cultural diversity. MIT, Harvard, Stanford, Princeton, and Yale all are distinguished private universities that welcome international students with distinct culture, religion, and even race.
To sum up, the cultural diversity has little to do with the country. That is to say, the economic development and education are independent upon this concern.
以上就是这篇关于多元化民族的利弊的雅思写作范文的全文,可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。
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