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The graph below shows the number of days spent on making a new car in four companies from 1998 to 2006.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the time consumed in the process of manufacturing a new car in four companies between 1998 and 2006.
[首段写作注意:1. 突出线图的“变化”; 2. 词汇替换]
BMW is most noteworthy, as there was a distinct trend. Despite a slight dip between 2000 and 2002, the days allotted in the whole production soared to 45 days in 2006, 20 days longer than that in 1998.
[主体段 1: 1. 数据分组 1: BMW: 唯一一个用时减少的公司; 2. 词汇使用—程度修饰词+“描述变化”的动词/名词; 3. 从句使用]
By contrast, the remaining three companies, Toyota, Ford and VW, all improved the efficiency in car manufacturing, represented by several declines in the manufacturing time. To specify, similar development could be found in both Ford and VW, whose consumption of time dropped consistently from 50 days to 35 days and from 36 days to 18 days respectively before remaining stable between 2004 and 2006. In addition, as for Toyota, although the period of 1998 to 2002 witnessed its 6-day marginal growth, the figure fell to 30 days afterwards, echoing that for Ford between 2002 and 2004.
[主体段2: 1. 数据分组 2: Toyota, Ford, VW: 用时增长的三个公司;同时,细化对比三个公司的工时;2. 词汇使用—程度修饰词+动词;3. 伴随状语(V-ing和V-ed形式)+从句使用]
Overall, the time of new car production varied from company to company and from year to year.