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9月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 购物方式变化导致汽车使用增多的利弊

2022-09-20 09:38     作者 :    

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 本期作者:张婷婷

2022年9月17日雅思大作文题目

In some countries, some small town-center shops are going out of business because customers are shopping at large out-of-town stores. As a result, some people without cars have limited access to shops, and there may be an increase in the use of cars. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? (2022/9/17) 

范文及解析

Introduction

In some parts of the world, a mushrooming number of consumers are prone to choose large out-of-town shopping malls ,rendering town-center stores go for a burton. Ineluctably, the use of cars is surging at an alarming rate for shops can be hardly accessible without them. Personally, the demerits brought about by such a development overwhelm its merits.

解析

这个题目看似是一个新题,实则是2011年11月27日的旧题,十多年后它又再次出现,可以当成一道新题来看了!本题属于社会类话题,看似简单易懂,但是真正审题时比较容易偏题,需要确定好题目中讨论的优缺利弊是针对哪个具体方向的development!

mushrooming adj. 越来越多的

render  v.使得;使处于...状态

go for a burton v. 消失;不再存在

ineluctably adv.  不可避免地;必然地

Body 1

Beyond all doubt, the increasingly heavy reliance on cars to go shopping is bound to result in thorny problems for both environment and traffic . When people ,instead of shopping near homes, drive to the out-of -town supermarkets , the city will head toward more knotty traffic congestion on weekends accompanied by perishing commuting traffic on weekdays. Immediately followed is the environment deterioration for cities are likely to be subjected to gross pollution brought by more exhaust fumes emitted to the atmosphere.

解析

汽车使用增多会对城市的环境和交通造成很棘手的问题;私家车使用量的增加,可能会造成交通堵塞等问题,加重交通系统的负担。同时,大量的汽车也会加重空气污染

is bound to v.一定会;

thorny adj. 棘手的;难处理的;

head toward v.驶向;向...进发;

knotty adj. 棘手的;难处理的;

perishing adj. 糟糕的;

deterioration n. 恶化;

be subjected to v.  遭受;承受;

gross adj. 严重的;显而易见的

Body 2

With small town-center shops going out of business, people will have limited shopping alternatives . Those without automobiles are unable to travel to retail locations outside of the city, having no choice but to crisscross great distance from supermarkets to home by public transport . Even for families with private cars, it is highly inconvenient for them to access to some daily suppliers ,especially when they are in urgent need.

解析

没有车的人往返大商场会非常困难,只能乘坐公共交通来回往返,造成了生活上的极大不便;即便是有车的人,临时需要的日用品,开车出城去购买也是极其不方便的;

crisscross v.多次往返于;来回奔波于

Body 3

Large retail malls ,undeniably, do have their own edges,among which the most conspicuous one would be the varieties of products they stock. By no means would it be possible for the consumers to enjoy one-stop shopping service in a regular store,but this is achieved in a modern shopping complex. Meanwhile,thanks to cheap and abundant land resources as well as lower rent in rural areas, consumers are more likely to enjoy more preferential prices.

解析

大超市中的东西相对来说更加丰富,消费者能享受一站式购物体验并且郊区的土地资源与超市的租金便宜,商品的价格也会更优惠;

edges n.优点;优势

conspicuous adj.明显的

by no means  adv. 绝不

one-stop shopping service 一站式购物服务

preferential adj. 更优惠的

Conclusion

In conclusion, shopping at large stores located outside of town ,notwithstanding the trend's benefits, has exerted a baneful impact on traffic and environment. By this token, online shopping and environmentally-friendly vehicles are viable solutions and in desperate need to be developed.

解析

notwithstanding prep.  虽然

exerted a baneful impact v. 对...施加不良影响

by this token adv. 由此看来


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