阅读量:
本期,我们来看主体段落怎么写
还是下面这个题目:
The table below shows the working time of males and females in different regions in the year of 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
首先,兼职工作中,
当我们能考虑到希腊时长低于平均水平,
荷兰&英国高于平均水平时,
可以形成两组对象之间的对比:
In Greece, part-time employees worked fewer hours than the European average. The opposite was the case in the Netherlands and England, where the amounts of hours averaged at over 450 hours for both genders.
其中除了表对比的句型之外,还需关注where从句所起到的信息补充作用。
本句,
还可以用 as 构建两句之间的“同时间”关系:
Part-time employees in Greece worked fewer hours than the European average, as the other two countries saw the hours averaging at over 450 hours for both genders.
主语有更替,选用动词(average)有细节。
3分钟过去了,
你学会作数据对比、描述同时信息了吗?