The table shows information about the numbers of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.

范文及解析

　　The table illustrates how many Australians paid a visit to the seven most popular countries in the years of 1999 and 2009.

　　1999年游客多寡比较（出境游客主要去往新西兰；中国在7个中最不受欢迎）

　　In 1999, outbound tourists from Australia were predominantly to New Zealand, with over 500,000 Australians making the trip, followed by those to the UK (400,000) and the USA (300,000). Comparatively, there were over 100,000 people visiting Indonesia, Fiji and Japan, while China, as the least popular destination, merely appealed 86,000 Australian visitors. *确定数值时多样化选择了伴随状语/括号/there be +数据等手法

　　2009年游客多寡比较&较1999年比较（前三名不变，新西兰奔100万；中国反超斐济和日本）

　　One decade later, the top three most favored countries remained the same, of which the number of arrivals to New Zealand, after a 113-percent growth, amounted to 1 million. The popularity rankings in the rest four destinations, however, changed dramatically. To be specific, Fiji and Japan were outranked by China in this year, where the number of Australian overseas departures tripled to 300,000. *确定数值时多样化选择了不同关系代词引导的定语从句搭配细节动词

　　概括主要特征

　　Overall, more and more Australians traveled outside the country, whose preference varied.