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复考首场刚过,考题正是“支招小作文”系列近期新鲜出炉的“表格”。
本系列上周新推出《地图Q&A》为大家答疑解惑,本周地图真题登场,一起来看看考官最容易被哪些细节打动吧!
Ø 最打动考官的点1: 增加语义密度,一个句子主干就要说清楚前后两个时间点上的变化: A carriageway will be built as a replacement of the main road. (道路被改建) The school and residential area will remain south of it. (校园住宅不变) Ø 最打动考官的点2: 以同位语a loop(环路) 补充the carriageway,以a straight way 补充the main road; 再辅以定语从句(that … )或换用分词短语(going through …)进一步补充/修饰。 Ø 最打动考官的点3: “改建”可以这样说:… be built as replacements/a replacement of …(介词短语充当状语成分) Ø 最打动考官的点4: 除了用“remain”,还可以: 1- The plan affects neither the location nor the number of something. (“neither…nor… 二者都不”对名词进行否定;当然,视具体图表,我们还可以有“the plan affects neither the location nor the size”,举一反三,轻松掌握!) 2- something will stay where it is. (where地点状语从句) 再看一篇, 更多技能点get! Ø 最打动考官的点1: 利用“with+noun”引出其他设施,增加语义密度: The area will be expanded, with a shop and a café in the corners. The land will be redevloped, with a shopping centre built as a replacement of the shops. 当整体变化不大时,可先给出一个总述:The area will not change enormously,再以利用“except that…”宾语从句 细述其中有改变的一两项。 Ø 最打动考官的点2: “改建”: Replacing the west court, a leisure pool will be built. (现在分词短语作伴随状语) Where the west court is now, there will be aleisure pool.(地点状语从句) Ø 最打动考官的点3: A changing room, closely adjacent to the café, … 形容词短语后置,补充/修饰名词 ★ 小结 ★ 以上就是本期地图题特辑的内容。 当然,地图题写作技巧可远不止这些,更多内容,下篇再见!