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方法一:长短句综合运用
阅卷老师也有审美疲劳的时候,所以写作文的时候要长短句结合,不要一直运用长句,这样也会增加有语法错误的风险。也不要一直用短句,这样会显得文章太过肤浅简单。有时候写一个简单但是精辟的小句子,可以起到画龙点睛,揭示主题,总结全文和联系上下文的作用。
You may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind.
你也许已走出我的视线,但从未走出我的思念。
Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.
任何值得做的,就把它做好。
The hard part isn’t making the decision. It’s living with it.
做出决定并不困难,困难的是接受决定。
It’s better to be alone than to be with someone you’re not happy to be with.
宁愿一个人呆着,也不要跟不合拍的人呆一块。
强烈建议:在文章开头 用一个长句和一个短句。在文章主题部分,要先用一个短句,然后再用长句。采取短句长句相结合的原则来组织文章。文章结尾一班用一个短句一个长句就可以了。
方法二:主题句
文章要有一个主题,就必定要有一个主题句,没有主题句的文章,或者主题句是隐藏在文章里面的文章会让人读完之后有一种云里雾里的感觉。所以文章的开头或者结尾一定要有一个主题句,让读者一目了然,这样是很可靠的拿高分方法。
At the very beginning,you must work hard at your study and be fully prepared before the test and examination. (主题句)Without enough preparation,you can hardly get good grades.
To start with,you should exercise everyday and control your diet if you really want to lose weight.(主题句)Without enough exercise,you cannot lose weight healthily.
Since my idea of arts festival integrates training students’ artistic ability with improving their aesthetic taste,I believe it will go a long way in art education,which is also the ultimate aim of university arts festival.(主题句)
To keep ourselves alive,we need all kinds of nutrition.Eating is the most important way by which we can get starch,protein,vitamin,sugar,fat,and some trave elements.(主题句)
People often ask me whether I find students in China very different from those I have taught for the past 25 years in Australia and what the differences are. (主题句)
强烈建议:主题句一定要写在文章的开头或者结尾比较明显的位置,比如句或者一句。一定不要将主题句隐藏在文章最中间不显眼的地方。
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