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高分雅思写作要有实例支撑全文

2013-09-10 15:01     作者 :    

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种应用实例论证的雅思写作方法就是应用名人实例,因为这是大家都知道的事情,能够引起共鸣。

 

Although sticking to one’s goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleon’s story is a case in point. After Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France, he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not. He went on to conquer the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe, he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire. But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely island.

 

在这个雅思大作文主体中,引用了拿破仑的事迹来加以论证。拿破仑是家喻户晓的人物,而且决定拿破仑及其帝国命运的滑铁卢战役也是大家都知晓的。通过这个例子来说明在适当的时候学会放弃是很有说服力的。在举例时,选择一些大家都知晓的,这样才能更有说服力。

 

第二种雅思写作方法就是应用考生自己的亲身经历来加以论证。

 

The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to one’s own confidence and hope, no matter how little the hope may be. And one must learn to accept failure, learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100 meters. My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons, but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of the other. When I surpassed him, he gave a cry of surprise, I won at last and I learned much from the race.

 

在这个雅思大作文主体中,在提出主题句后,先是加以论述,然后用长跑和爬山作为例子。又用自己的亲身经历和感受来论证室外活动可以增强一个人的毅力,这样的论证非常鲜活。

以上就是新航道雅思频道为大家整理的高分雅思写作要有实例支撑全文,希望对大家有帮助,更多资讯、资料请访问新航道雅思写作频道 http://www.xhd.cn/ielts/xiezuo/
 

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